What do clically trained people think of this string quartet? (Inspired by Y!A)?

for having no experience writin quartets it's great :) since it is a quartet it's a lot like writing choral music. you would have a soprano, alto, tenor, and a b. the definition of a string quartet is an ensemble with two violins, a cello, and a piano. i didn't hear a piano but that's ok. i loved the polyphony with the low and high voices! i only have one suggestion that you start off slower at the beginning and then build up to a climax, a lot like a book. good job! it was wonderful!!! :)